Thank you very much for the thorough feedback, it was exactly what I needed because I was having difficulties identifying focus points without any guidance. The pronoun agreements were mostly conscious. It was a style I learned in corporate communication for better diplomacy and I didn’t realise it was not suitable for academic writing, so it’s an easy fix.
It was especially valuable the repetition strategy you shared for better connection of ideas. I was trying to avoid repeated words at all costs without knowing it can be done strategically to improve clarity.
I will work on replacing pronouns for more specific synonyms and study some punctuation today.
Thank you for the guidance and reassurance, I will let you know how it goes once I receive my scores.
I received my TOEFL scores and I achieved 30 points in writing this time!
My total score was 115 this time, and “MyBest Scores” are now 119.
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30-day boot camp course is beneficial for students who are planning to take the TOEFL exam in a month. This course is quite useful to brush our writing skills during the last minute preparation. I feel the evaluator should give more clear suggestions which help students to focus and write more efficiently. However, I found this course is very feasible for non-working students like me since the fee is affordable. Thanks to the founder.
The boot-camp course is very constructive. There are a lot of practice questions for each section in this course which simulates the real exam. After submitting the answer, we can compare our response with the sample answer. Not only the sample answer but also Michael’s evaluation helped me to improve my writing skills in such a short span.
Cagri Ozdemir –
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