Michael’s Online TOEFL Course offers an error correction service for your independent and integrated wrting practice tests.

Online TOEFL Course

Unfortunately, it takes 50 minutes to correct an independent and integrated practice test, and since there are 40 independent and 43 integrated practice tests plus 100′s of skill-building exercises helping STEALTH students gain competence in independent and integrated writing skills like decoding the writing task, organizing a coherent response, writing detailed developmental paragraphs, and ending the essay with a conclusion, Michael cannot help everyone throughout day, especially with over 150+ students who are subscribed to his Online TOEFL Course. However, for an additional charge of $50.00, Michael can evaluate, EDIT, and score one independent or integrated writing practice test from “The 7-Step System to Pass the TOEFL iBT,” with one-on-one tutorial feedback helping to improve your writing proficiency.

With this Error Correcting Service for your Independent and Integrated Writing Tasks, Michael your TOEFL writing mentor, will better your writing abilities when you pay the low price of $50 through your Pay Pal account and emailing the payment to michael@csusb.edu. Thus, when you are ready for Michael to edit one of your writing practice tests,

1) Copy and paste the $50.00 Pay Pal receipt into the body of your e-mail,

2) in the body of the e-mail, paste the essay that you want him to read, evaluate, EDIT, and score,

3) in the title box of the E-mail, write “Pay Pal Editing Request for TOEFL Independent or Integrated Writing Practice Test 1” (or whatever number it is),

4) in the body of the E-mail, write

Dear Michael,

 Enclosed in this e-mail is my TOEFL Independent or Integrated Writing Practice Test 1 along my Pay Pal receipt. Please make all the necessary grammar and writing corrections in this essay, so I can see what I need to do to score higher.


 First Name Last name

Personally, I feel this is a great way of helping to improve your overall writing proficiency, especially if you are aiming to score 24 points or higher in the writing section of the TOEFL iBT. Case in point, you are receiving the benefits of having someone give you one-to-one tutorial feedback correcting your Independent and Integrated Writing Tasks and improving your writing skills as long as you need him to! Furthermore, by knowing exactly what errors you are making and how you can eliminate them, it will help you in both academic and professional writing, long after you have taken the TOEFL iBT. For instance, Michael will correct and focus on whether or not you decoded the writing task, organized a coherent response, wrote detailed developmental paragraphs, and ended the essay with a conclusion. Moreover, he will mentor and give you feedback targeting your writing proficiency and sentence organization by improving your word choice, punctuation, transitions, topic development and writing organization. What an amazing opportunity right?

So correct and improve your writing proficiency by making an easy payment of $50! And have Michael give you tutorial feedback evaluating, EDITING, and scoring one independent or integrated writing practice test from “The 7-Step System to Pass the TOEFL iBT.”

Online TOEFL Course


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